《一個公平的世界》

楼主 青松子 于 2005-06-27 14:42:48
《一個公平的世界》


生活總的沒良權
別看他人吃太豐
但求安樂有工錢
別比他人的富裕
何來世間之公平
試想他人的苦況
但求貧中找快樂
此祝人人顧別人
公平自在此天下


Many people are living not with good right,
They are starving hungry while the others eat too much
They can only earn a poor rate of labor
While some the others earn to be rich.

Is it fair for every body, which lives in the world?
Have you thought about the other's difficulties?
You won't be happy if you or families are in bad stage.
Wishing every body would think about the others
A real good and fair would be existing in the earth.
 
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1楼 青松子 于 2005-06-27 15:15:37
現代詩的變遷,會不會跟電子時代有關?
在中文詩的領域中,自從1917年1月,白話文運動後,經過多次白話詩的推展,都不是十分理想,就是當時的發起人,他們寫出詩章,不見得有理想的成就,新詩的發展,本人認為因應時代的變遷而有所改變,到了二十世紀後,因無線電話和電腦的普遍情度,因而令人們通訊所需大大加快了,因此寫詩的文體出現要求快,所以現代詩作越來越見短少了.到今時今日出了一種前所有的文體,我就稱它為:「電訊詩」吧!即短訊是也.

這種「電訊體」未知年代可以維持多久又不能可估計!那麼其「電訊詩」又可維持多久呢?這也許要在將來才有一明朗的答案,現在尚言之過早.
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2楼 Aihua 于 2005-06-27 18:17:27
关注社会，表达人文关怀，很好。请进：Re:《一個公平的世界》
英文部分有部分句落修改一下似乎更好，班门弄斧了，海涵：

Many people are living not with good endowments,
They are starving hungry while others eat too much
They can only earn a poor rate of wage
While others earn to be rich.

Is it fair for every body living in this world?
Have you thought about others' hardship?
You won't be happy if you or your families are in bad stage.
Wishing every body would be thoughtful of the others
A real good and fair society would come about on earth.
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3楼 青松子 于 2005-06-30 22:18:26
I would check my English part again carefully, thank you a lot! [em26]
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