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    An Apple (A Poem by Baolin CHENG)
    An Apple

    Baolin Cheng

    Subconsciously
    She puts an apple
    On the end of her thighs

    A green light

    Allows my eyes
    To stay there longer decently
    I’m looking at a part in her body
    Where I should have avoided

    A few minutes later
    She puts the apple
    Back on the desk
    Nothing has changed
    Except its color

    Following the red apple
    Now I remove my eyes
    From that part of her body

    Only the fragrance of fruit
    Remains on the end of her thighs
    Its sweetness permeates
    The soft fabric there

     
    [ 这个贴子最后由Aihua在12/6/2004 11:47:51 PM编辑过 ]
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      Both offered good comments. Thank you. For Aihua: 1, "the green light 'used in a single line to hint  that the green apple functions as a green light ( pay
      attention to the last line in the fourth stanza.) If she were driving, she
      couldn't play the apple; if the narrator were driving, he couldn't steadily
      look at her body, so obviously it happens in a room. 2. " steadily" is better,
      as it saves a word to make this line shorter. I may adopt your suggestion. You
      are great!Thank you.  
      baolin cheng
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